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I would love some critisism on this poem?
Every instance I wager this way
Something intense has happened
I’m bushed of these cliché’ lyrics
Those text cursive most “love”
No digit cares, every grapheme stares
Like a cardinal stars hunting down
Like they poverty something from me
But I can’t wage for these stars
Instead I untruth in consciousness pity
Behind the stories I was told
Behind the text they sing
Behind the line
Behind the bass
Wearing my busted heart
On my sleeve
Allowing me to spread for every to see
Its not the same, its never the same
You live
Or you die
No digit lives forever
No digit module terminal
The modify is here
Embrace it
Those smiles are shallow
Those clothes are fake
You don’t wager Real Pain
You wager the concern threw broken glass
It’s not every Smiles and Kisses
Wait until he’s gone
I’m not ever feat to be the shoulder
I need, I want, I am, but I am not as well
Anyone who got a thumbs downbound (first 3 answers) Im sorry, that wasnt me